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Shandalow Posted 7 years ago
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Please help me with motivation letter!

Hi! Could you please proofread my letter? Many thanks!

(They have the question: how do you integrate with international students?)

Through previous experience of attending an exchange activity to Japan and guiding Norwegian students on our school exchange program, I’ve developed my social skills to integrate with foreigners.

Before going to Japan, I searched for their taboos to keep me polite. I joined their basketball club and found that the common interest is the most efficient icebreaker. Same techniques can be applied when I study abroad, especially parties and school clubs abound in western countries.

Also, I had basketball training with a Norwegian for six months. Sometimes cultural misunderstanding occurred such as different views on tactics. She tended to showcase personal skills; however, we focused on the team cooperation. But eventually, both sides make concessions by listening and accepting new concepts.

My experience improves my skills to integrate with people of different ethnicities. Also, I plan to learn Dutch and Germany as languages will be the last barriers of blending into different cultures.









  

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It is understandable, but pretty awkward and unnatural English. ) to Japan and guiding Norwegian students on our school exchange program, I’ve developed my social skills to get along well with people of different cultures than mine. integrate with foreigners .

  • It is understandable, but pretty awkward and unnatural English.
  • ) to Japan and guiding Norwegian students on our school exchange program, I’ve developed my social skills to get along well with people of different cultures than mine.
  • integrate with foreigners .
  • Before going to Japan, I searched for their taboos to keep me polite.
  • I joined their basketball club and found that discovering a the common interest is the most efficient icebreaker.
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It is understandable, but pretty awkward and unnatural English.

Through previous experience of attending an exchange activity (We attend lectures and classes, but not activities.) to Japan and guiding Norwegian students on our school exchange program, I’ve developed my social s

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