Please help me with motivation letter?

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I am writing to apply for the Bachelor’s Degree program in fashion design in English language.
I have always been interested in the fashion and the way it affects on our lives. Thinking about my future career I see myself in a position of fashion designer and have my own fashion line. In the future I am willing to open first fashion house in (my country) and develop fashion world in my country. Further, I want to enter in Asian market. Designing new clothes, accessories, bags is something that really excites me. From my childhood I was really interested in art, fashion design. I think it’s because I grew up in family of artists. My grandfather is an artist and my father is a fashion designer.
I attended (school) open days 2 times and met with its stuffs. After that I was fully sure I need to apply to (school). Studying at (school) is a perfect choice for me both academically and experientally. As the university is well known for its fashion design courses. I expect to be able to start a successful career after I graduate. What is more I have a skill for drawing and taking photography. Also I have an interest on other fields of design. Such as graphic design and interior design. I have passion for travel and understanding different cultures. So the opportunity to meet students from all over the world who are interested in fashion and study fashion design in capital of fashion are the things I put much upon value. I hope that the diversity and academical excellence of that course will bring out the best in me.
I believe that I am suitable person to study fashion design at your school. I like to design new clothes, bring new ideas and design extraordinary things. I know the value of teamwork and hard work are corner stones of success in fashion industry so now I am taking a teamwork course and drawing lessons. Because success is something that makes my world turn around.
Thank you very much for considering my request. I am looking forward to the opportunity to study at your school and to make a great contribution to your community.
Yours faithfully,
(my name)