Please help me with ielts writing task 1

The bar chart provides data on many kinds of sports played by New Zealand males and females in 2002.

The participation of both boys and girls in sports is fairly equal. However, their sporting preferences tend to be different in terms of types of sports which the prefer to play.

The most common sport among girls is netball with participation rate reaching 25%. A roughly proportion of boys join in soccer, which is clearly their favorite sport. Besides that, 10% of females also enjoy practicing cricket, while hardly any females are interested in this game.

Both athletics and swimming are taken part in by fewer boy, but the difference in participation rates of swimming between males and females is more significant, at about 10%. Other sports such as tennis, basketball and material arts have lower levels of popularity, with the total proportion of each type standing at approximately 12%. In addition, there is a considerable figure for boys and girls say they play sport not referred on the chart above.

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