Please help me with ielts writing task 1
The first picture shows the layout of a gallery and the other one give information on proposed changes to the gallery space.
It is clear that considerable changes can be seen in terms of the use of space in the gallery. There will be a completely new entrance and more space for exhibitions.
Actually, visitors enter the gallery through the door, which leads into a lobby. However, in the future, the plan will move the entrance to the Parkinson Court side of the building, and people will walk straight into the permanent exhibition sector. In place of the lobby and office areas are shown on the existing plan, the proposed plan replaces them with an education area and a small storage sector.
The permanent exhibition space in the remade gallery will be roughly twice as large as it is now because it will occupy the sector that is used for temporary exhibitions at present. There will be also a new storage room and a new room for special exhibitions. These rooms are illustrated with red on the current plan and are not existing part of the gallery.
Thank you so much.
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The first picture shows the layout of a gallery and the other one give information on proposed changes to the gallery space.
It is clear that (I recommend not using these it-clauses in your essay. Do not write "it is clear that", "it is well-known that," "it is believed that", "it can be seen that" etc. Good writers avoid such
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