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PLEASE HELP me with Erasmus motivation letter
Hello, I want to apply for Erasmus exchange, but i have a little trouble with my motivation letter.please help me to improve it. I really need your opinion and maybe some help to check if its good. I have to email it in 4 days. Thank you in advance. xxx. I.
I am applying for the Erasmus exchange program as part of my studies. My name is XXXYYY and I am currently studying to become a nutritionist at the University of Primorska. After completing one year of studies on Faculty of Health Sciences I realised that I have very strong interest to develop my knowledge in in branch of Nutrition and Dietetics. I have decided to apply for this program because it is an excellent opportunity to test my ability to deal with new things and expand my knowledge. Having seen through the materials of Erasmus Student Network I was delighted to find the opportunity to study at University of Granada. I am 23 years old, born in Serbia, now studying in Slovenia and I have a lot of experience with adaptations to new cultures and people. I lived in Argentina in my early age where i learned Spanish and got friends which I'm still in contact. Trough my travels i met a lot of people who were on their Erasmus exchange and they shared their good experience with me. One of the main reason for choosing Spain as my favorite destination is the fact is of wanting to get in touch with Spanish culture and the opportunity to improve my Spanish and English, also Spanish is the first foreign language that I can fully understand, and It would be easier for me to improve my knowledge in science, nutrition and dietetics. I am very excited to get in touch with University of Granada because I think it has a long tradition and excellent teachers who can improve my skills which is very important not only for my future career but also for my self-development. Furthermore, I am enthusiastic to know that I will meet new cultures, get in touch with new people, get more motivation and curiosity for what surrounds me. At the same time, it will be a very enriching experience, both personally and academically. Later, it could be a decisive element in my resume, because of having studied abroad is a fact appreciated by many employers, which also demonstrates my dynamism. I'm very ambitious in many fields, on of them is the desire of learning new things from different people, and I also enjoy in sharing different states of mind. My curiositiy is very big when is a question of upgrading my knowledge and skills.
I need help how to end the letter
I am applying for the Erasmus exchange program as part of my studies. My name is XXXYYY and I am currently studying to become a nutritionist at the University of Primorska. After completing one year of studies on Faculty of Health Sciences I realised that I have very strong interest to develop my knowledge in in branch of Nutrition and Dietetics. I have decided to apply for this program because it is an excellent opportunity to test my ability to deal with new things and expand my knowledge. Having seen through the materials of Erasmus Student Network I was delighted to find the opportunity to study at University of Granada. I am 23 years old, born in Serbia, now studying in Slovenia and I have a lot of experience with adaptations to new cultures and people. I lived in Argentina in my early age where i learned Spanish and got friends which I'm still in contact. Trough my travels i met a lot of people who were on their Erasmus exchange and they shared their good experience with me. One of the main reason for choosing Spain as my favorite destination is the fact is of wanting to get in touch with Spanish culture and the opportunity to improve my Spanish and English, also Spanish is the first foreign language that I can fully understand, and It would be easier for me to improve my knowledge in science, nutrition and dietetics. I am very excited to get in touch with University of Granada because I think it has a long tradition and excellent teachers who can improve my skills which is very important not only for my future career but also for my self-development. Furthermore, I am enthusiastic to know that I will meet new cultures, get in touch with new people, get more motivation and curiosity for what surrounds me. At the same time, it will be a very enriching experience, both personally and academically. Later, it could be a decisive element in my resume, because of having studied abroad is a fact appreciated by many employers, which also demonstrates my dynamism. I'm very ambitious in many fields, on of them is the desire of learning new things from different people, and I also enjoy in sharing different states of mind. My curiositiy is very big when is a question of upgrading my knowledge and skills.
I need help how to end the letter
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I am applying for the Erasmus exchange program as part of my studies. My name is XXXYYY and I am currently studying to become a nutritionist at the University of Primorska. After completing one year of studies at the Faculty of Health Science s , I realised that I have very strong interest to develop my knowledge in a branch (which branch?
- I am applying for the Erasmus exchange program as part of my studies.
- My name is XXXYYY and I am currently studying to become a nutritionist at the University of Primorska.
- After completing one year of studies at the Faculty of Health Science s , I realised that I have very strong interest to develop my knowledge in a branch (which branch?
- be specific) of Nutrition and Dietetics.
- I have decided to apply for this program because it is an excellent opportunity to test my ability to deal with new things and expand my knowledge.
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I am applying for the Erasmus exchange program as part of my studies. My name is XXXYYY and I am currently studying to become a nutritionist at the University of Primorska. After completing one year of studies at the Faculty of Health Sciences, I realised that I have very strong interest to develop my knowledge in a branch (whi
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