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Mahdimiri Posted 7 years ago
Letter Writing

Please help me with editing an academic email to prof.s

Dear Professor

I have a master's degree in the field of Mechanical Engineering and more precisely in Energy Systems. I obtained my degree from Shahrood University of technology with a total GPA of 4/4. Will you be taking on new PhD students for fall, 2020? If I am invited to interview, is there any way you will be able to meet with me?
I have studied your profile on the university's web page and some of your investigations in the field of Energy and thermodynamic. I am so delighted that the result of my investigations are aligned with yours and we have many common interests.

I have attached my curriculum vitae in order to draw your attention to my proficiencies for advanced researches. I am able to enthusiastically undertake researches on any topic needing your kind surveillance and control.

If you have any questions regarding my achievements and proficiencies, do not hesitate to contact me via my email address.

Thank you in advance for your attention to my email

  

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I hope you saw my suggestions on your earlier post. Here are a few more. Instead of beginning by talking about your degrees and your GPA, I suggest you begin by telling him why you are writing to him.

— Clive

  • I hope you saw my suggestions on your earlier post.
  • Here are a few more.
  • Instead of beginning by talking about your degrees and your GPA, I suggest you begin by telling him why you are writing to him.
  • I also suggest you should enlarge on your comment about having common interests with him.
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I hope you saw my suggestions on your earlier post. Here are a few more.


Instead of beginning by talking about your degrees and your GPA, I suggest you begin by telling him why you are writing to him.


I also suggest you should enlarge on your comment about having common interests with him.


. . . please do not hesitate to contact me . . .

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