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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Please, help me with creating and advertisement!

Hello guys,

I want to make an eye-catching advertisement of USB Flash drives through Facebook.

Basically, I want to sell pills shaped USB flash drives and I will post the adv. On pharmacist groups.

I want to create a creative funny advertising. Something like "you aren't fully dressed without a smile."
But of course relative to what I am selling.

Can anybody help me with this by making some suggestions? As obviously, English is not my first language hence I couldn't think of a better place to post this.

Thanks so much in advance. It really means a lot to me.
  

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Excuse me, what's wrong about posting the same thread on two different forums!
i thought it would be better if i got different responses from different people.
thanks for your reply anyways
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Anonymouswhat's wrong about posting the same thread on two different forums
It wastes our time when a question has been answered elsewhere. We are volunteers. Many students are asking for our help. You are asking for free help for you to make money at your business. Choose a website that you trust and stick with it.
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I totally understand that. I appreciate what all of you are doing here.
Yes, i was asking for that. However, after someone on the other forum told me the same thing, i changed my mind and came up with some ideas which kindly if you don't mind i want you to comment on whether they are grammatical or not.

Are you sick of the conventional USB Flash drives in the market?
Are you searc
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AnonymousAre you sick of the conventional USB flash drives in the market?
With the correction, it is grammatical.
AnonymousAre you searching for something more personalized?
OK
AnonymousSomething that can express your personality without even talking?
With the correction, it
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That's prefect! thanks a lot for your help.
I would never notice these mistakes without you pointing out them.
One last question, Can i post it like that? or i have to rephrase the "grammatical sentence fragment"
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Anonymous Can I post it like that?
You can. Advertisements frequently do not use complete sentences.

eg.
The best pills for your memory.

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