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Rasingh Posted 8 years ago
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You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:

  • introduce yourself
  • explain what sort of job you would like
  • say what experience and skills you have

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am looking for part time programmer post.


My name is Raju Singh, basically i am from Uttar Pradesh, I have completed my master degree in 2014, after completion of my studies , i started my carrier by working in XXX PVT LTD, In this organization i am working as a associate java developer and I would like to work as a part time programmer in IT firm.


I Have been working in this organization since 3.4 years. Besides having experience in programming languages like C, JAVA,Spring and Hibernate. I am proficient in the use of computer operating systems (Windows, Ubuntu) as well as Microsoft office and other business software applications.


If you have any positions in your database that might fulfill my requirements, Please do not hesitate to contact me.


Thank you in advance and I look forward to hearing from you soon.


Your Sincerely,

Raju Singh

  

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I have highlighted some areas of your text that have mistakes.. Dear Sir/Madam, I am looking for (missing word) part time (missing punctuation) programmer post. My name is Raju Singh, basically i am from Uttar Pradesh, I have completed my master degree in 201 4, after completion of my studie s , i started my carrier by working in *** PVT LT D, In this organization i am working as a associate java developer and I would like to work as a part time programmer in (missing word) IT firm.

  • I have highlighted some areas of your text that have mistakes..
  • Dear Sir/Madam, I am looking for (missing word) part time (missing punctuation) programmer post.
  • My name is Raju Singh, basically i am from Uttar Pradesh, I have completed my master degree in 201 4, after completion of my studie s , i started my carrier by working in *** PVT LT D, In this organization i am working as a associate java developer and I would like to work as a part time programmer in (missing word) IT firm.
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  • Besides having experience in programming languages like C, JAV A,S pring and Hibernat e.
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I have highlighted some areas of your text that have mistakes..


Dear Sir/Madam,

I am looking for (missing word) part time (missing punctuation) programmer post.


My name is Raju Singh, basically i am from Uttar Pradesh, I

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