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Chaw Su Posted 19 years ago
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please help me with correcting my english!
0 Hi all! 02 br
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00 I would like you to correct my English before sending mail to my oversea friend. 02 br
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00 Thank for your help 00 02 br
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00 Dear friend, 02 br
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00 Sorry for my late reply. 00 00 I was about to reply your mail as soon as I received your’s but Ye Zay came and pick me up in hurry at that evening coz he had an appointment. 00 00 We're all longing for seeing you!. We’re moving house to 00 near your building. But the agreement will not take effect till 1 June so we’re staying in your room at your house at the moment. Don’t worry we’ll tidy up your room before you come.heeheehee 00 00 Now I'm in 4 months pregnant. I'd got serious sickness within 3 months pregnant. Ye zay want to have a GShock ( G-9000)model. 00 00 Mom said that she doesn’t want you to buy shampoo, soap and other cosmetic stuff when you come back… 02 br
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00 With best wishes, 02 br
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00 chaw su 0-
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00 I would like you to correct my English before sending mail to my oversea friend. 02 br
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00 Thank for your help 00 02 br
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00 Dear friend, 02 br
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00 Sorry for my late reply. 00 00 I was about to reply your mail as soon as I received your’s but Ye Zay came and pick me up in hurry at that evening coz he had an appointment. 00 00 We're all longing for seeing you!. We’re moving house to 00 near your building. But the agreement will not take effect till 1 June so we’re staying in your room at your house at the moment. Don’t worry we’ll tidy up your room before you come.heeheehee 00 00 Now I'm in 4 months pregnant. I'd got serious sickness within 3 months pregnant. Ye zay want to have a GShock ( G-9000)model. 00 00 Mom said that she doesn’t want you to buy shampoo, soap and other cosmetic stuff when you come back… 02 br
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00 With best wishes, 02 br
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00 chaw su 0-
Top answer
0 Sent you an email, Chaw Su. good luck! 0-
- 0 Sent you an email, Chaw Su.
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0 Sent you an email, Chaw Su. There are several ways to explain the sickness with pregnancy...good luck! 0-
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0 Dear Ron! 02 br
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00 I mean morning sickness!! all my sentences are correct except that sickness??? My email address: 01 a 00 Email Removed 00 "> 01 span 00 Email Removed 02 span 02 a 02 br
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00 Thanks for your help! 02 br
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00 With best wishes, 02 br
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00 Chaw S
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00 I mean morning sickness!! all my sentences are correct except that sickness??? My email address: 01 a 00 Email Removed 00 "> 01 span 00 Email Removed 02 span 02 a 02 br
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00 Thanks for your help! 02 br
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00 With best wishes, 02 br
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00 Chaw S
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