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Milaniyamiila Posted 15 years ago
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You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain in London, England. In your letter to Mr Sullivan:
  • explain why you are writing
  • describe your qualifications and experience
  • explain how they can contact you
Write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Mr. John Sullivan,

Recently, I have encountered your advertisement about job position for Spanish instructor. I am very interested in this position and moreover, I believe that I am suited for this position due to my qualifications and experience.

The Spanish language is my native language and my knowledge of English is Advanced.

I graduated from the University of Languages in Madrid and got a degree in Spanish philology with excellence.

Since graduation the university I have been working in the University of languages in Paris teaching Spanish. I am also in charge of publishing student newspaper about Spain in the Spanish language. Recently, I have passed exam in Certification of Spanish Teacher and got high grades. I also had a positive experience in translation prospectus from Spanish into English.

I am sending you my CV and references from my present employer. If you have any question please do not hesitate to contact with me through my e-mail which is written in my CV.

I am looking for your reply,

Yours sincerely
  

Top answer

Hi milaniyamiila; Here are some suggestions. Dear Mr. John Sullivan, Recently, (no comma) I have encountered (This is not a very good verb to use - "see" or "read" is better.

  • Hi milaniyamiila; Here are some suggestions.
  • Dear Mr.
  • John Sullivan, Recently, (no comma) I have encountered (This is not a very good verb to use - "see" or "read" is better.
  • Use the simple past tense.
  • ) your advertisement about for the job position of for Spanish instructor.
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Hi milaniyamiila;

Here are some suggestions.

Dear Mr. John Sullivan,
Recently, (no comma) I have encountered (This is not a very good verb to use - "see" or "read" is better. Use the simple past tense. ) your advertisement about for the job position of
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Thank you

You are great and very helpful

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