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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

PLEASE HELP ME WITH 3 SENTENCES?

Could you please help me correct these 3 sentences grammatically?

- I have nothing on me to prove my identification. (didn't have ID on him) Can you say this?

- How did I not see you earlier. You are so pretty and you've been working here 3 months and I never saw you.

- I used to never get this far in the game, yet alone have this many points this far in the game without having died once. (video game)

Thank you

  

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The first two are fine. I would change the third one. I'm not sure what you mean by alone.

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  • The first two are fine.
  • I would change the third one.
  • I'm not sure what you mean by alone.
  • Do you mean by yourself without help from anyone?
  • I never get this far in the game all by myself, yet so far, I have acquired this many points without having died once.
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The first two are fine. I would change the third one. I'm not sure what you mean by alone. Do you mean by yourself without help from anyone?

I never get this far in the game all by myself, yet so far, I have acquired this many points without having died once.

Is that what you meant?
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You want "let alone" not "yet alone." And I would reverse "used to never" :
I never used to get this far in the game, let alone have this many points...
I never used to get this far in the game, much less have this many points...
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