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G2FG Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please help me to write a good essay.
I Have to write a simple essay about this statement : "Some people think that schoolchildren should take exams at the end of each year."
And I am limited in words : "Write between 120 - 150 words"
Could you check my essay? Is it good in grammar?
Essay :
I agree with the statement that schoolchildren should take exams at the end of each year. I will state my opinion and support it with the appropriate arguments.
First of all, it seems to me that when children know that there is an exam at the end of the school year they try not to miss classes and come allways prepared for the lesson and they are motivated to learn more and well.
Although, some people may disagree with me, as far as I am concerned exams are good for teachers too. They will be willing to prepare their students well because exams results are connected with their work.
Finally, I want to reinforce my opinion that schoolchilden should take exams at the end of the year.
Thank you all.
And I am limited in words : "Write between 120 - 150 words"
Could you check my essay? Is it good in grammar?
Essay :
I agree with the statement that schoolchildren should take exams at the end of each year. I will state my opinion and support it with the appropriate arguments.
First of all, it seems to me that when children know that there is an exam at the end of the school year they try not to miss classes and come allways prepared for the lesson and they are motivated to learn more and well.
Although, some people may disagree with me, as far as I am concerned exams are good for teachers too. They will be willing to prepare their students well because exams results are connected with their work.
Finally, I want to reinforce my opinion that schoolchilden should take exams at the end of the year.
Thank you all.
Top answer
I agree with the statement that schoolchildren should take exams at the end of each year. I will state my opinion ( I think you did just that in the previous sentence. ) and support it with the appropriate arguments.
- I agree with the statement that schoolchildren should take exams at the end of each year.
- I will state my opinion ( I think you did just that in the previous sentence.
- ) and support it with the appropriate arguments.
- First of all, it seems to me that when children know that there is an exam at the end of the school year they try not to miss classes and come allways prepared for the lesson and they are motivated to learn more and well.
- Although, (no comma) some people may disagree with me, as far as I am concerned exams are good for teachers too.
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I agree with the statement that schoolchildren should take exams at the end of each year. I will state my opinion ( I think you did just that in the previous sentence. Why use the future here?) and support it with the appropriate arguments.
First of all, it seems to me that when children know that there is an exam at the end of the school year they try not to miss classes a
First of all, it seems to me that when children know that there is an exam at the end of the school year they try not to miss classes a
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