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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Please help me to write a formal letter to an university!
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to you to ascertain what are your requirements for entrance to your undergraduate Modern Language Studies for Hungarian students. The information listed on your web site for EU students does not include information for Hungarian students.
I live in Hungary and I would like to continue my studies in the ... UNI.
I will graduate from high school in June 2011. I will be taking Hungary's comprehensive final exam for high school students, known as the "Matura Exam" that covers the following subjects:
1) Hungarian Language
2) German Language
3) English Language
4) Mathematic
5) History
I would greatly appreciate it if you provide me with some information on the curricula of the Undergraduate degree, what the schedule would be, what the admission requirements are, the costs and fees, and any further additional information I should be aware of. Please take into account that I am a foreign student for any possible international requirements that need to be covered up.
I look forward to receiving your reply. Should you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at *EMAIL*
Sincerely yours,
**NAME**
I am writing to you to ascertain what are your requirements for entrance to your undergraduate Modern Language Studies for Hungarian students. The information listed on your web site for EU students does not include information for Hungarian students.
I live in Hungary and I would like to continue my studies in the ... UNI.
I will graduate from high school in June 2011. I will be taking Hungary's comprehensive final exam for high school students, known as the "Matura Exam" that covers the following subjects:
1) Hungarian Language
2) German Language
3) English Language
4) Mathematic
5) History
I would greatly appreciate it if you provide me with some information on the curricula of the Undergraduate degree, what the schedule would be, what the admission requirements are, the costs and fees, and any further additional information I should be aware of. Please take into account that I am a foreign student for any possible international requirements that need to be covered up.
I look forward to receiving your reply. Should you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at *EMAIL*
Sincerely yours,
**NAME**
Top answer
Hi. I made a few little changes, but you had done a nice job in writing the letter. I removed "additional" because you already had "further," so it was redundant.
- Hi.
- I made a few little changes, but you had done a nice job in writing the letter.
- I removed "additional" because you already had "further," so it was redundant.
- I removed "up" from "cover up" because that means you are trying to hide something bad you did.
- " I added in a few details and respaced it.
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Hi. I made a few little changes, but you had done a nice job in writing the letter. I removed "additional" because you already had "further," so it was redundant. I removed "up" from "cover up" because that means you are trying to hide something bad you did. You need only "cover." I added in a few details and respaced it. I hope this helps.
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