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Olgakim Posted 19 years ago
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Please help me to write a beautiful letter

Here are 3 sentences:

I would love to know more about your research. I want to ask you with this letter whether it is possible to contribute to your farther work on the theme as a PhD student.

I find it really impressive to go deeply into the research of advanced materials properties, to use modern experimental equipment, to propose a new method or design and finally to implement the invention into the real production!

Please do not hesitate to contact me per e-Mail, telephone (mobile, home or work). I will be glad to get any information about the PhD research possibilities in the field of materials design for turbines parts by Siemens AG.

Are there some mistakes?

Thank you VERY MUCH in advance!!
  

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OlgakimHere are 3 sentences:

I would love to know more about your research. I want to ask you with this letter whether it is possible to contribute to your farther work on the theme as a PhD student. With this letter I'd like to as
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Thank you very much!! I see my knowledge is fare away to be perfect :-(

I steel didn’t send this letter. Could someone please make these sentences nicer too?

I read your and Dr. Stamms last patents and articles. I am very interested in the research of materials design for turbines. I have studied deeply the physics of metals, ceramic materials, and surface phenomena as well as m

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