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Vyn Posted 9 years ago
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ST is a Vienamese singer being famous for a lot of popular songs and music videos. He has fans all around the country. Most of them are the young who will go insane if they have a chance to meet him in person. I think that having a lot of his catchy song as well as looking like k-pop stars are the main reasons why he become a phenomenon. I am not favour of him. Every body find that he always tries to copy others artist's style. But this is not why i dont like him. The reason is he never admit he is a copy cat.

  

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ST is a Vietnamese singer, being famous for both his popular songs and music videos. He has fans all over the country. Most of them are the young people who would go insane if they had a chance to meet him in person.

  • ST is a Vietnamese singer, being famous for both his popular songs and music videos.
  • He has fans all over the country.
  • Most of them are the young people who would go insane if they had a chance to meet him in person.
  • I think that his catchy songs as well as his good looks – he looks like a k-pop star – are the main reasons why he has become such a phenomenon.
  • I am not a fan of his .
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ST is a Vietnamese singer, being famous for both his popular songs and music videos. He has fans all over the country. Most of them are the young people who would go insane if they had a chance to meet him in person. I think that his catchy songs as well as his good looks – he looks like a k-pop star are the main

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