Please help me to review my ielts task 1 .Thank you very much

The chart shows the number of students in a UK university who completed (on time or late), failed to write, and rewrote their dissertation in 1990, 2000, 2010.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make

comparison where relevant.

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The bar graph illustrates how many students who studied in a UK university completed( in correct time or lately),failed to write and rewrote their essay over the course of 20 years starting in 1990 .

Looking at the chart, it is immediately obvious that the quantity of students completing dissertation registered the highest point.The number of students finishing on time underwent the most dramatic change

In 1990 , the number of learners finishing their essay in right time was 150 .This figures increased considerably by 150 in 2010 .A similar trend was witnessed in total number of students who completed lately ,which experienced an upward trend from roughly 25 to nearly 50.

In contrast ,the quantity of students failing to write dropped to approximately 10 by 2010 and in this year ,this number of students hit the lowest point .Furthermore ,the year 2010 saw a decrease slightly after a climb to around 25 in the number of students rewriting .

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