Please help me to read and check my writing on practicing BEC test!!

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Part 1Tomorrow, Mr. Jorge Ruiz, Manager of Research & Development in GSE company, will arrive at our office at 2 pm. However, I will be on the returned flight that I’ll be late. During that time, please serve him some tea and send a plan to Mr. Ruiz.Many thanks.  Part 2Dear Ms. Dalton,Thank you for your letter. It will be a great product for our company, which specialize in developing software. We want to offer better comfort for our staff. Could you discount your products to reasonable prices so that we would buy with a huge number of them? To confirm everything will be okay, should we have a meeting in the Hall room in Paston Hotel on Saturday, January 12th?I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely,Rose Quinn.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Tomorrow, Mr. Jorge Ruiz, Manager of Research & Development in GSE ~~company~~, (That does not seem to be a natural name.) will arrive at our office at 2 pm. However, I will be on the returned (wrong form) flight that (wrong form) I’ll be late. During that time, please serve him some tea and send a plan to (That is not in the instructions.) Mr. Ruiz.

Many thanks.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Dear Ms. Dalton,

Thank you for your letter. It will be a great product for our company, which specialize (wrong form) in developing software. We want to offer better comfort for our staff. Could you discount your products to reasonable prices so that we would buy with a huge (unnatural) number of them? To confirm everything will be okay, should we have a meeting in the Hall room in Paston Hotel (Is your company a hotel?) on Saturday, January 12^th?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

You did not follow the instructions very well.

Dear Ms. Dalton,

Thank you for your letter. If your product does what you claim, it will help our staff be more productive, as our company's business is software development. We employ about 500 IT professionals, and also have 100 other staff members who spend a lot of time in front of screens every day. However, the price seems a bit steep. Since your product is not yet proven, would you be open to negotiating a volume discount? I would like you to come to our offices on January 12 for a discussion and to demonstrate the screens to some key staff. Is that date acceptable to you?

Me 001 · Answer

I am unemployed engineer from Syria. Due to the circumstances in my country in the last 12 years, I lost my job. I want to develop my experience so I think Management will be beneficial for me to find better job. However, with my recent situation I cannot afford to pay for the certificate of this course. My recent income is less than 20$ monthly which is not enough for my family expenses, for this reason it is very much difficult for me to gather such an amount of money for the certificate. Financial Aid will help me take this course without any adverse impact on my monthly essential needs. Therefore, I am badly in need of this financial aid. I want to take this course, as I want to learn Marketing in English. I want to complete the Marketing: Customer Needs and Wants Course on offer by Business School. This course will boost my job prospects. It will help me perform better in carrying out Marketing and give me an edge over my competitors. A verified certificate will attach credibility to the certificate I receive from this course. I plan to complete all assignments on or before time as I have done in previous Signature Track Courses. In addition, I intend to participate in Discussion Forums, which I have found to supplement my learning immensely in the other online courses I have taken on Courser. In addition, I am planning to grade assignments that are peer-reviewed which I believe will be an invaluable learning opportunity.

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