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Reza Ameri Posted 7 years ago
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Please help me to make these sentences sound more professional!

Hi, could you please help me to make these sentences sound more professional?


Sentence #1: I have always been empathetic and curious about the safety and well-being of people and the impacts that the built environment have on their welfare.

Sentence #2: The potential of human losses will increase if we do not aim to design safer buildings and infrastructures.

Sentence #3: I am confident that my educational qualifications and previous work experience can bring excellent expertise, skill and knowledge to your team.

Sentence #4: I would like to provide high quality engineering services that exceed expectations and ensure safety of people.

  

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Reza Ameri Sentence #1: I have always been empathetic and curious concerned about the safety and well-being of people and the impacts that the built environment have on their welfare. Reza Ameri Sentence #2: The potential number of human losses deaths will increase if we do not aim to design safer buildings and infrastructures. Reza Ameri Sentence #3: I am confident that my educational qualifications and previous work experience can bring excellent expertise, skill and knowledge to your team.

  • Reza Ameri Sentence #1: I have always been empathetic and curious concerned about the safety and well-being of people and the impacts that the built environment have on their welfare.
  • Reza Ameri Sentence #2: The potential number of human losses deaths will increase if we do not aim to design safer buildings and infrastructures.
  • Reza Ameri Sentence #3: I am confident that my educational qualifications and previous work experience can bring excellent expertise, skill and knowledge to your team.
  • OK.
  • Reza Ameri Sentence #4: I would like to provide hig h-q uality engineering services that exceed expectations and ensure the safety of people.
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Reza Ameri Sentence #1: I have always been empathetic and curious concerned about the safety and well-being of people and the impacts that the built environment have on their welfare.
Reza AmeriSentence #2: The potential number of huma

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