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Creativeguru Posted 14 years ago
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I am looking at very advance English words please help
1. While you quench your insatiable thirst of playing golf at this world-class golf course, your family will get drenched by surrendering themselves to this beautiful landscaped paradise’s ultra modern amenities.
2. Imagine a villa Where your family step out just to step onto the wonder of delight - they get engulfed with the aura of exotic beauty
3. Invite your guest at Sky Lounge and let your ideas echo the altitude of success because unspoken words will lead the brainstorming.
1. While you quench your insatiable thirst of playing golf at this world-class golf course, your family will get drenched by surrendering themselves to this beautiful landscaped paradise’s ultra modern amenities.
2. Imagine a villa Where your family step out just to step onto the wonder of delight - they get engulfed with the aura of exotic beauty
3. Invite your guest at Sky Lounge and let your ideas echo the altitude of success because unspoken words will lead the brainstorming.
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1. -- The vocabulary you chose was rather repellent. 2.
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- -- The vocabulary you chose was rather repellent.
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- Imagine a villa where your family steps out into a wonder of deligh t, an aura of exotic beauty -- The same here: it sounded like a tsunami.
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1. While you indulge your passion for golf at this world-class golf course, your family will be able to pamper themselves with this beautifully landscaped paradise’s ultra-modern amenities.-- The vocabulary you chose was rather repellent.
2. Imagine a villa where your family steps out into a wonder of delight, an aura of exotic beaut
2. Imagine a villa where your family steps out into a wonder of delight, an aura of exotic beaut
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