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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Please help me to get married
Hi everybody,please help me with a short text that
discribes the moment he asked me.
I want to say the following:
My child stayed calm (unusual! ;-))
The voice of my boyfriend trembled while he asked.
And my answer coultn't be heard because I was crying.
My version with some emotions and what I hope the correct idioms:
Our son was telling silence,
my boyfriend breathed voice due to the most important question and my answer smothered with tears.
That's the moment we decided to begin our new life together.
Is that correct English or do I have to modify some expressions?
Thanks a lot for helping.
Regards
Kristina from Germany
discribes the moment he asked me.
I want to say the following:
My child stayed calm (unusual! ;-))
The voice of my boyfriend trembled while he asked.
And my answer coultn't be heard because I was crying.
My version with some emotions and what I hope the correct idioms:
Our son was telling silence,
my boyfriend breathed voice due to the most important question and my answer smothered with tears.
That's the moment we decided to begin our new life together.
Is that correct English or do I have to modify some expressions?
Thanks a lot for helping.
Regards
Kristina from Germany
Top answer
Your explanation is the correct approach, not your second version, which is hardly intelligible. Stick with this: My boyfriend's voice trembled as he asked me, and my answer couldn't be heard because I was crying. My child stayed calm as usual.
- Your explanation is the correct approach, not your second version, which is hardly intelligible.
- Stick with this: My boyfriend's voice trembled as he asked me, and my answer couldn't be heard because I was crying.
- My child stayed calm as usual.
- That's the moment we decided to begin a new life together.
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Your explanation is the correct approach, not your second version, which is hardly intelligible. Stick with this:
My boyfriend's voice trembled as he asked me, and my answer couldn't be heard because I was crying. My child stayed calm as usual. That's the moment we decided to begin a new life together.
My boyfriend's voice trembled as he asked me, and my answer couldn't be heard because I was crying. My child stayed calm as usual. That's the moment we decided to begin a new life together.
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