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Arefin Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

Please help me to fix the motivation letter

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00I'm a new user, in this site. Please help me to fix my motivation letter 02br
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00Dear Sir or Madam, 02br
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00I am writing to you to apply for the Master of Science in Banking and Finance. 02br
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00Though I hold my degree in Computer Science, my aim is to work in an international Bank related to Finance and Investments. Therefore I would like to gain theoretical and practical knowledge in Banking and Finance in a multicultural context. I believe a University with high reputation like *** and Its highly knowledgeable faculty members – Alessandro Beber, Jean-Pierre Danthine, Michael Rockinger is the best place to achieve my career objectives. 02br
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00I hold a four years Bachelor of Science degree in Computer Science from North South University. I completed my Bachelor of Science degree in December 2003. Besides my studies, I started my career as a part-time investment consultant on 1996. Since, I am very much interested about finance and investment, I picked “Forecasting of Stock Price” as my final thesis. In the thesis, I tried to integrate business forecasting models – ARIMA, Time-series Decomposition with computer generated regression analysis. After my graduation, I devoted my full time on investment consulting. I registered on Meenhar Securities Ltd., Vanik Bangladesh Ltd. and Vanguard Securities Ltd. for trade through the stock exchanges. 02br
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00The ambitions I have exposed to you would not be true without a solid theoretical background and a strong real world experience specialized in the banking and finance. I am deeply confident that HEC-Lausanne is one of the best places for learning banking and finance. Switzerland is very much well known for her Banks and financial institutions and I want to learn from the leader to fulfill my ambitions. 02br
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00Thank you very much for considering my request. I am looking forward for your positive response. 02br
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00Sincerely Yours, 02br
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0'Dear Sir or Madam, 02br 02br 00I am writing in application for admission to your Master of Science in Banking and Finance degree program. 02br 02br 00Although my current degree is in Computer Science, my aim is to work in an international bank in the area of finance and investments. Therefore I would like to gain theoretical and practical knowledge in banking and finance in a multicultural context.

  • 0'Dear Sir or Madam, 02br 02br 00I am writing in application for admission to your Master of Science in Banking and Finance degree program.
  • 02br 02br 00Although my current degree is in Computer Science, my aim is to work in an international bank in the area of finance and investments.
  • Therefore I would like to gain theoretical and practical knowledge in banking and finance in a multicultural context.
  • I believe that a university with a high reputation like HEC-Lausanne and its highly knowledgeable faculty – Alessandro Beber, Jean-Pierre Danthine and Michael Rockinger for instance - is the best place to achieve my career objectives.
  • 02br 02br 00I hold a Bachelor of Science degree in Computer Science from North South University, completing it in December 2003.
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0'Dear Sir or Madam, 02br
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00I am writing in application for admission to your Master of Science in Banking and Finance degree program. 02br
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00Although my current degree is in Computer Science, my aim is to work in an international bank in the area of finance and investments. Therefore I would like to gain theoretical and practical knowledge in ba
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0Thanx Micawber for the corrections. Here is my curriculum vitae. Can you please check this, too? 02br
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00The challenging tasks of finance, particularly investment and financial management always intrigue me. 02br
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00During my undergraduate studies,
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0Objective 02br
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00The challenging tasks of finance, particularly investment and financial management, always intrigue me. 02br
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00Experiences 02br
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00During my undergraduate studies, I developed, individually and on a teamwork basis, different software programs for practical applications including: 02br
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0 Thanx Micawber for your help. 02br
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