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Coquette Posted 8 years ago
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The complex surveys conducted by the specialists made it possible to significantly expand and clarify the concept of the marine salmon ecology(the salmon ecology?).

Scientists were able to study the biological characteristics of fish and its habitat at different stages of the life cycle, to clarify the quantitative estimates of salmon abundance(population?) and biomass as well as their correlation with other nekton components , to discover new facts about the salmon ecology in the marine period of life.

  

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This is a native version: Scientific surveys have made it possible to significantly expand and clarify salmon ecology, refining estimates of abundance and biomass, clarifying correlations with other nektonic components, and discovering new information about the fish's ecology during the marine period of its life cycle.

  • This is a native version: Scientific surveys have made it possible to significantly expand and clarify salmon ecology, refining estimates of abundance and biomass, clarifying correlations with other nektonic components, and discovering new information about the fish's ecology during the marine period of its life cycle.
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This is a native version:

Scientific surveys have made it possible to significantly expand and clarify salmon ecology, refining estimates of abundance and biomass, clarifying correlations with other nektonic components, and discovering new information about the fish's ecology during the marine period of its life cycle.

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