Please help me to evaluate this writing

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need but others say that advertisements tell us about new products that will improve our lives.I certainly agree with the second opinion.Let's explain why the second opinion is better than the first one.

The advertisements is the way for the brand to introduce their new products to the consumers.The brand will show the advantages and the function of their product and it will make the consumer want to buy it.But the consumers won't know the disadvantage of these products.In my opinion,before the brand manufacture the new product they also research and consider the intersests of the consumers.Futher the life are changing quickly and the needs of the consumers are more everyday,so that the new products will improve our lives.On the other hand,there are also have a little brand concentrate on money and they do not tell the truth when they advertise make the consumers lose the truth in the advertisement.For example , the company advertise the bed can treat the backache for the elder people with an expensive cost , but when they use it for a while, it doesn't have any effect on the backache.

In conclusion ,I think the goverment should research and check the new product before it have been advertised.Everything also have the advantages and the disadvantages so that every consumers have to research carefully before buy the product on the advertisement.