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Letter Writing

Please help me to edit the following letter ( urgent )

0Dear Mr.Vahabian,02br
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00With reference to several recently changes that you made in your P/I's for different parts , for example for disk you changed the manufacturer 3 times , please be informed that these changes are not acceptable for us and makes several problems. Therefore , after fixing the manufacturer once , we are going to open L/C for the related P/I and amending the L/C would not be possible . Because change of manufacturer is against the policy of our company.02br
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00Best regards,0-
  

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Vahabian,02font 02br 02br 01font 00We are writing about several recent changes that you have made in your P/I's for different parts. 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Please note that we cannot accept these changes,as they cause several problems. 01i 00Therefore , after fixing the manufacturer once, we are going to open L/C for the related P/I and amending the L/C would not be possible.

— Clive

  • Vahabian,02font 02br 02br 01font 00We are writing about several recent changes that you have made in your P/I's for different parts.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Please note that we cannot accept these changes,as they cause several problems.
  • 01i 00Therefore , after fixing the manufacturer once, we are going to open L/C for the related P/I and amending the L/C would not be possible.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Best regards,02font 02br 02br 00I don't understand the part in italics, but I think you should try to say it in a simpler way.
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi,02br
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01font00We are writing about several recent changes that you have made in your P/I's for different parts. For example, you changed the manufacturer for a disk 3 times.02font02br
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