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00Referring to our email dated 2006/12/18 regarding problematic injector clips , again 02br
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00we should inform you according to report of00 00our Q.C . department , your delivered injector clips have deviations as follow :02br
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00-00 00Existence of burr on edges of 00 00injector clip , that makes disassembling on fuel-reil.( the die has been time worned 00 00probably ).02br
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00-00 00Existence of outstand on the coating that with the small friction this outstand transforms to powder. That makes that part lose its coating.02br
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00-00 00Sharpness and not applying00 00R2.5 ( + 0.2 , -0.2 ) , that causes burring on the injector clip ( dimensional discrepancy ) .02br
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00By considering the above mentioned points , please try to solve the related problems. We should inform you although Mr.Mirzabeighi has observed the problem , but no action has been done by your side in this regard. Please try to transfer the deviations to your supplier . We will announce the exact number of problematic parts for the purpose of claiming in near future.00 0-
  

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  • 11font 10with friction the part loses its coating.
  • 12br 12br 12br 12br 11del 11font 10By considering12font 10 12del 11font 10With reference to 12font 10the above mentioned poin11font 10ts,12font 10 please try to solve the related problems.
  • Mirzabeighi has 11del 11font 10observed12font 12del 10 11font 10seen 12font 10the proble11font 10m,11del 10 but12del 12font 10 no action has been 11font 11del 10done 12del 12font 11font 10taken 12font 10by your 11del 11font 10side12font 12del 10 11font 10[company].
  • 12del 12font 11del 10 11font 10Please try to transfer the deviations to your supplier12font 12del 11font 10 [Please inform your supplier of the deviations]12font 10.
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