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Shenet Posted 12 years ago
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Please help me to corret my mistake

Here is an email i have sent to someone :
( I would like to inform you about the XXX's Invoice they've issued for us for registering from Monday to Saturday and charged $171 after discount from $190, it differs to your PR that you have done for registering only Monday to Friday. If you have anything wrong, please let me know. Thanks!! )
I just want to learn about my mistake and clearly grammar.
Thank you in advance.
  

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Here is an email I have sent to someone : I would like to inform you about the ***'s i nvoice they've issued to us for registering (you register for something only once, not for a time range of Monday-Saturday. Is this for a hotel stay? ) from Monday to Saturday .

  • Here is an email I have sent to someone : I would like to inform you about the ***'s i nvoice they've issued to us for registering (you register for something only once, not for a time range of Monday-Saturday.
  • Is this for a hotel stay?
  • ) from Monday to Saturday .
  • The invoice was for $171 discount ed from the full price of $190 .
  • (I don't understand the next part.
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Here is an email I have sent to someone :

I would like to inform you about the ***'s invoice they've issued to us for registering (you register for something only once, not for a time range of Monday-Saturday. Is this for a hotel stay? Or a per diem charge for attending some event?) from Monday to Saturday. The invoice was for $171 di
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Dear Alphecca Stars,

I am very happy to see your reply and it is very helpful.
For PR meant ( Purchase Requested Form ) it is used in my company for request to buy something , and it was not for a hotel ( for an advertising on one website ).
Thank you so much for your kind.
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Hello shenet:

This is what I would have written:

Dear Ms. Smith;
I would like to inform you about a discrepancy between ***'s invoice and our PR. The invoice they sent me was for our advertisement on their web site running from Monday to Saturday (09/15/2014 through 09/20/2014). The invoice was for $171 discounted from the full price of $190. But on our PR, it states that t
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Good morning Alpheccastars!!!

Thanks for taking the time to think of me. How kind you are !!
Emotion: smile For your help.
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