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Hello,Please help me to correct this writing:I was fortunate enough to work with over 9 years as Technical Assistant at Industrial Zone, One of my missions was assisting and guiding Investors to establish their factories in industrial zone. I have had the pleasure of working with many great professionals and leaders over that time span. I have learned a lot, and thus sharpened my skills within the area's I have worked in. I have also built a great network for friends and professional contacts, and look forward to growing that group, and starting business in a creative manner.

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Is "Industrial Zone" the name of the company you work for?

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<!DOCTYPE html><p>yes</p>

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I was fortunate enough to work ~~with~~ as Technical Assistant at Industrial Zone for over 9 years. One of my roles was assisting and guiding investors in establishing their factories in industrial zone. (Did they build factories inside your company? I have never heard of that kind of business arrangement.) I have had the pleasure of working with many great professionals and leaders during that time ~~span~~. I have learned a lot, and ~~thus~~ sharpened my skills within the areas I have worked in (What specific skills are you talking about?). I have also built a great network of friends and professional contacts, and look forward to growing that group, and starting a business in a creative manner.

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