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I am completing seven years of stay in Hong Kong and applying for permanent Hong Kong ID. I would like to request you to amend my name as Rai Binu in Permanent Hong Kong ID. My visa gets expired on 16th November 2014.
  

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I am completing seven years of residence in Hong Kong am applying for a permanent Hong Kong ID. I would like to request you to amend my name to Rai Binu in my permanent Hong Kong ID. My visa expires on 16 November 2014.

  • I am completing seven years of residence in Hong Kong am applying for a permanent Hong Kong ID.
  • I would like to request you to amend my name to Rai Binu in my permanent Hong Kong ID.
  • My visa expires on 16 November 2014.
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I am completing seven years of residence in Hong Kong am applying for a permanent Hong Kong ID. I would like to request you to amend my name to Rai Binu in my permanent Hong Kong ID. My visa expires on 16 November 2014.

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