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Sali Posted 9 years ago
Letter Writing
Please help me to correct this letter:
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing this letter to request an extension in the deadline for submitting my TOEFL and GMAT scores, the application deadline for international students is February 1, for fall admission, but I can’t get the TOEFL and GMAT until the end of April.
I’m currently working full time, and also studying Bachelor’s Degree programme in networks, web and telecommunication, at the xxxxxxx University, ÉCOLE NATIONALE xxxxxx in xxxxx, I will get my bachelor's degree by the end of this month,
I’m looking forward to apply to the Master of Business Administration program for the 2017 Fall admission at the xxxxxxxxx UNIVERSITY. However, due to a work commitment and the late end of Bachelor’s programme, I formally request an extension to the submission deadline and undertake to deliver TOEFL and GMAT scores by the end of April, moreover I can submitting my application and all other supporting documents at time.
Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
I am writing this letter to request an extension in the deadline for submitting my TOEFL and GMAT scores, the application deadline for international students is February 1, for fall admission, but I can’t get the TOEFL and GMAT until the end of April.
I’m currently working full time, and also studying Bachelor’s Degree programme in networks, web and telecommunication, at the xxxxxxx University, ÉCOLE NATIONALE xxxxxx in xxxxx, I will get my bachelor's degree by the end of this month,
I’m looking forward to apply to the Master of Business Administration program for the 2017 Fall admission at the xxxxxxxxx UNIVERSITY. However, due to a work commitment and the late end of Bachelor’s programme, I formally request an extension to the submission deadline and undertake to deliver TOEFL and GMAT scores by the end of April, moreover I can submitting my application and all other supporting documents at time.
Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Top answer
A comma does not mark the end of a sentence. Use a full stop. Dear Sir or Madam , I am writing this letter to request an extension of the deadline for submitting my TOEFL and GMAT score s .
- A comma does not mark the end of a sentence.
- Use a full stop.
- Dear Sir or Madam , I am writing this letter to request an extension of the deadline for submitting my TOEFL and GMAT score s .
- The application deadline (Fall, 2017) for international students is February 1, for fall admission, but I can’t take the TOEFL and GMAT until the end of April.
- I’m currently working full time and also studying for my Bachelor’s Degree programme in networks, web and telecommunication, at the xxxxxxx University, ÉCOLE NATIONALE xxxxxx in xxxxx, I will get my bachelor's degree at the end of this mont h.
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A comma does not mark the end of a sentence. Use a full stop.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to request an extension of the deadline for submitting my TOEFL and GMAT scores. The application deadline (Fall, 2017) for international students is February 1, for fall admission, but I can’t take the TOEFL and GM
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to request an extension of the deadline for submitting my TOEFL and GMAT scores. The application deadline (Fall, 2017) for international students is February 1, for fall admission, but I can’t take the TOEFL and GM
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