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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Dear HR,

I would like to extend my Malaysia tours until 05th March. I have planned to go Langkawi for exploring some beach activities.

So please manage my return ticket on 06th March.

Thanks,
XYZ
  

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Dear HR, I would like to extend my Malaysia tours until 05th March. I plan to go Langkawi to explore the beaches. Could you please change my return ticket from xx to 06th March ?

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  • Dear HR, I would like to extend my Malaysia tours until 05th March.
  • I plan to go Langkawi to explore the beaches.
  • Could you please change my return ticket from xx to 06th March ?
  • Thanks, XYZ
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Dear HR,

I would like to extend my Malaysia tours until 05th March. I plan to go Langkawi to explore the beaches.

Could you please change my return ticket from xx to 06th March?

Thanks,
XYZ
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