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She suddenly woke up from her bad dream. She realized how much she missed those drives with him. Those long drives. And most importantly, him. She was striving hard to accept the fact that they are/were not one among those "happy couples" anymore. She felt tears at the corner of her eyes. In moments, she was asleep once again.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

A bit melodramatic, but the grammar is fine.

Anonymous · Answer

Could you please help me by making it more simple? without changing it's meaning.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

It  already uses simple words, and no idioms. Is there some part that you don't understand?.

Anonymous · Answer

No, thank you <img class='emoticon' style='Width:19px;Height:19px;' data-delaysrc='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/1.gif' src='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/1.gif' alt='Emotion: smile'/>

CalifJim · Answer

AnonymousShe was striving hard to accept the fact that they ~~are/were~~ were not one among those "happy couples" anymore.

I've given my recommendation in red above.

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