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Beckman, P., Verma, S., & Rao, R. (2003, 6-9, Oct. ). Use of mobile mesh
(missing image) networks for inter-vehicular communication. Paper presented at the Vehicular technology conference, IEEE58th.

(missing image) This paper is a unique specialized experimental paper about one of the applications of wireless mesh network in intelligent transport systems. It conducted by three doctors from the San Francisco University. In their experiment, there are three vehicles connecting to each other based on the common WiFi wireless technology (IEEE 802.11/G), three results carried out for the experiment research, with the intentions of gathering these result, they managed vehicles keeping at common high-way speed of 100km/hour with 30 to 300 meters. The result showed that firstly, the mesh wireless networks that are based on WiFi technology are easy established and maintained, secondly, it will bring number advantages in terms of merging with other existing technology to provide ubiquitous computing, for example of VoIP However, this experiment research is too simple covering number of challenges or problems including its potential application about voice over wireless mesh network contrasting with other studies on challenges and problems. (Wang, Patil &Wang, 2006; Huang, Wang & Chang, 2006; Salem & hubaux, 2006) In addition, in my research there are numbers of applications and architectures apart from this typical application.