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Excitekps Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

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Respected Sir,



Subject: Request for Family Visit Visa

I wish to bring my family (wife and 2 children) on a visit visa to , so that they can stay here for six months and then return to . So I would like to request you to arrange six months visit visa for my family.


I am hoping to bring them here by mid-November 2008.


I enclose passport copies and other relevant documents.


Seeking your kind support and help in obtaining the above visa at the earliest possible.



Thanking You,





Yours sincerely,
  

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Dear Sir, Subject: Request for Family Visit Visa I wish to bring my family (wife and 2 children) on a visit visa to Doha, so that they can stay here for six months and then return to India . I would like to request you to arrange a six-month visit visa for my family. I am hoping to bring them here by mid-November 2008.

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  • Dear Sir, Subject: Request for Family Visit Visa I wish to bring my family (wife and 2 children) on a visit visa to Doha, so that they can stay here for six months and then return to India .
  • I would like to request you to arrange a six-month visit visa for my family.
  • I am hoping to bring them here by mid-November 2008.
  • I enclose passport copies and other relevant documents.
  • Thank you for your support in obtaining these visas at the earliest possible time.
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Dear Sir,

Subject: Request for Family Visit Visa

I wish to bring my family (wife and 2 children) on a visit visa to Doha, so that they can stay here for six months and then return to India. I would like to request you to arrange a six-month visit visa for my family. I am hoping to bring them here by mid-November 2008.

I enclose p
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THANK YOU VERY MUCH SIR............

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