Please help me to correct these sentences.
This letter to express our intend to withdraw the admission that you offered to our children, Ashley and Alwyn for the academic year 2018-19 in your school.
As the bank has declined the loan facility, we have no choice but to withdraw the admission. We can't maintain the school fee with our own unless we have a bank loan facility. We have expected a approval from the bank but it was declined.
Therefore, we kindly request you to return the transfer certificate and cheque subitted against the school fees.
We thank you for your generosity to give a opportunity for our children for the academic year 2018-19 in your school.
Sorry for the inconvenience in this regard.
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Has the cheque been presented/cleared?
- Has the cheque been presented/cleared?
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Dear Dr Smith, [Use the title and surname of the school principal]
We are writing this letter to express our intend intention to withdraw the admission application that you offered to
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