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Dear Sir,
My name is Charlotte, I am a mother of three children. One of them are on 7th grade and seeking admission for 8th grade on IB curriculum, and other two are on HKG, and seeking admission for 1st grade. . I understand that your institution is one of the best among the institutions in this city. We recently shifted from abroad to this city. I wish to provide them a good quality of education .I would like to enrol my children into your esteemed organization for the academic year 2018-19. Therefore, I kindly request you to provide an adimmission for my daughters and consider in giving them a place for them where they can to face more challenges and hopefully they will excel further under your guidance.
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You have three children, but you are only seeking admission for two of them. Is that correct? Dear Sir, My name is Charlotte.
- You have three children, but you are only seeking admission for two of them.
- Is that correct?
- Dear Sir, My name is Charlotte.
- I am the mother of three children.
- One of them is in 7th grade and seeking admission for 8th grade on IB curriculum, and other two are on HKG, and seeking admission for 1st grade.
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You have three children, but you are only seeking admission for two of them. Is that correct?
Dear Sir,
My name is Charlotte. I am the mother of three children. One of them is in 7th grade and seeking admission for 8th grade on IB curriculum, and other two are on HKG, and seeking admission for 1st grade. I understand that your institution is one of the best in this city. We re
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