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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
Letter Writing

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I am writing to inform you that I have received salary increment request from some of our staff members from my department.

I am writing this email to recommend for salary increase of staff members from my department who have come up with a request of salary increment.

They all are in need of financial assistance. Three among are drawing a very low salary in the company and other person deserves salary increment at the job level and experience . The current inflation in the country has made the cost of living standards go up and their current salary structures are insufficient to support their needs.

Thank you for your kind help on this

  

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Dear Mr Humpty, I am writing to inform you that I have received salary increment reques ts from some of our staff members from in my department. I am writing this email to recommend for the approval of those salary increas es. of staff members from my department who have come up with a request of salary increment.

  • Dear Mr Humpty, I am writing to inform you that I have received salary increment reques ts from some of our staff members from in my department.
  • I am writing this email to recommend for the approval of those salary increas es.
  • of staff members from my department who have come up with a request of salary increment.
  • They A ll the staff members concerned are in need of better financial remuneration.
  • assistance.
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Dear Mr Humpty,

I am writing to inform you that I have received salary increment requests from some of our staff members from in my department.

I am writing this email to recommend for

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