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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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We ordered same model on the both orders. It was supposed to be ordered 9 nos of Panasonic 65" TV as per the revised drawing. but we ordered 8 nos of Panasonic 65" TV plus 1 no. 55" Sony LCD TV with the order number FL500125.
Earlier we received 9 nos of 55" Sony TV for this project, which have been cancelled as per the revised specification and drawing, but again we ordered 55" Sony TV instead of Panasonic 65" TV so we have short of 1 Panasonic 65" TV
Earlier we received 9 nos of 55" Sony TV for this project, which have been cancelled as per the revised specification and drawing, but again we ordered 55" Sony TV instead of Panasonic 65" TV so we have short of 1 Panasonic 65" TV
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Sorry, but I cannot understand what was ordered, what was received, and what was cancelled.
- Sorry, but I cannot understand what was ordered, what was received, and what was cancelled.
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Sorry, but I cannot understand what was ordered, what was received, and what was cancelled.
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I also don't understand the above. I suggest you rewrite your text in point form; e.g.,
1- For order #16ABCD, we ordered 20 65-inch Panasonic TVs, but you sent us 19 55-inch Sony LCD TVs.
2- For order #16XYXS, we initially ordered 30 55-inch Panasonic TVs, but we amended the quantity ordered to 25. However, you sent us 10 65-inch Sony LCD TVs.
3- On Augu
1- For order #16ABCD, we ordered 20 65-inch Panasonic TVs, but you sent us 19 55-inch Sony LCD TVs.
2- For order #16XYXS, we initially ordered 30 55-inch Panasonic TVs, but we amended the quantity ordered to 25. However, you sent us 10 65-inch Sony LCD TVs.
3- On Augu
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Thank you for your kind help.
Sorry for the inconvenience caused in this regard.
Initially, we ordered and received 9 units of 55" Sony TV then cancelled as the specification has been changed. We had to order 9 units of 65 Panasonic TV according to the revised the specification. but the procurement department ordered 8 nos of Panasonic 65" TV plus 1 no. 55" Sony LCD TV instead
Sorry for the inconvenience caused in this regard.
Initially, we ordered and received 9 units of 55" Sony TV then cancelled as the specification has been changed. We had to order 9 units of 65 Panasonic TV according to the revised the specification. but the procurement department ordered 8 nos of Panasonic 65" TV plus 1 no. 55" Sony LCD TV instead
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I'm still not fully clear on it. Please write it in point form!
Also, use specific details (dates, order numbers, etc.) instead of words like "earlier."
Also, use specific details (dates, order numbers, etc.) instead of words like "earlier."
Anonymousbut the procurement department orderedAre you saying that your own procurement department made a mistake?
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Thanks once again.
Yes, it is our procurement department's mistake.
1- For order #FL500105, we ordered and received 9 units of 55" Sony TVs then it had been cancelled due to changes in the specification.
2- For order #500125 we ordered and received 8 nos of Panasonic 65" TV plus 1 no. 55" Sony LCD TV, but it was
Yes, it is our procurement department's mistake.
1- For order #FL500105, we ordered and received 9 units of 55" Sony TVs then it had been cancelled due to changes in the specification.
2- For order #500125 we ordered and received 8 nos of Panasonic 65" TV plus 1 no. 55" Sony LCD TV, but it was
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In business communications, it is critically important to be very clear. If you confuse your reader, you won't get what you want.
1- For order #FL500105, we ordered and received nine (9) 55" Sony TVs. But the order had been cancelled due to changes in the specifications. So we are returning these Sony TVs.
2- For order #500125 we ordered and received eigh
1- For order #FL500105, we ordered and received nine (9) 55" Sony TVs. But the order had been cancelled due to changes in the specifications. So we are returning these Sony TVs.
2- For order #500125 we ordered and received eigh
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