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We received the above shipment from China by Sea freight on 01/10/2016, which contains 7 packages of carpets and accessories, and these were consigned by Maison Interiors. Since we do not have any details. the items were carefully off-loaded and kept in our premises
  

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We received the above shipment from China by sea freight on 1 January 2016. It contains 7 packages of carpets and accessories consigned by Maison Interiors. Since we do not have any details, the items were carefully off-loaded and kept at our premises.

— Mister Micawber

  • We received the above shipment from China by sea freight on 1 January 2016.
  • It contains 7 packages of carpets and accessories consigned by Maison Interiors.
  • Since we do not have any details, the items were carefully off-loaded and kept at our premises.
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We received the above shipment from China by sea freight on 1 January 2016. It contains 7 packages of carpets and accessories consigned by Maison Interiors. Since we do not have any details, the items were carefully off-loaded and kept at our premises.
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