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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please help me to correct these sentences
With regards to the meeting held with available members on [Date] regarding issues raised on the team selection.
It has been noticed that there were many things dealt without proper communication / seeking the consent of all members
We need to have a proper discussion and consensus of opinion on the each subjects which is going to be implementation.
As for the selection of team, we need to look on the performance of the player who are on practice regularly. No member shall have authority to select any team player without prior discussion in the core committee. If any player in regular squad who will be played against our team, shall be removed from our squad and practice section as well
We, the soccer lovers supporting and running this club because only the passion of the Soccer but no other benefits.
We will continue our support and collective efforts to maintain this club for years to come unless otherwise stated above
It has been noticed that there were many things dealt without proper communication / seeking the consent of all members
We need to have a proper discussion and consensus of opinion on the each subjects which is going to be implementation.
As for the selection of team, we need to look on the performance of the player who are on practice regularly. No member shall have authority to select any team player without prior discussion in the core committee. If any player in regular squad who will be played against our team, shall be removed from our squad and practice section as well
We, the soccer lovers supporting and running this club because only the passion of the Soccer but no other benefits.
We will continue our support and collective efforts to maintain this club for years to come unless otherwise stated above
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I'm going to take a stab at this, knowing there are some unknown factors that may prove me wrong: With regard to the meeting held with available members, on [Date], regarding issues raised on the team selection: - It has been noticed that there were many things dealt with without proper communication with / seeking the consent of all members. We need to have a proper discussion and consensus of opinion on each of the subjects / conditions that will be implemented. As to the selection of the team, we need to look at the performance of the players who practice regularly.
- I'm going to take a stab at this, knowing there are some unknown factors that may prove me wrong: With regard to the meeting held with available members, on [Date], regarding issues raised on the team selection: - It has been noticed that there were many things dealt with without proper communication with / seeking the consent of all members.
- We need to have a proper discussion and consensus of opinion on each of the subjects / conditions that will be implemented.
- As to the selection of the team, we need to look at the performance of the players who practice regularly.
- No member shall have the authority to select any team player without prior discussion within the core committee.
- If any player in the regular squad be selected to play against our team, he shall be removed from our squad and our practice section.
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I'm going to take a stab at this, knowing there are some unknown factors that may prove me wrong:
With regard to the meeting held with available members, on [Date], regarding issues raised on the team selection:
- It has been noticed that there were many things dealt with without proper communication with / seeking the consent of all members.
We need to
With regard to the meeting held with available members, on [Date], regarding issues raised on the team selection:
- It has been noticed that there were many things dealt with without proper communication with / seeking the consent of all members.
We need to
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