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There are creases and unwanted folds in the silk shades supplied. This was caused by improperly stacked one by one in the carton box.

They tried to joint the broken glass pieces, but the joint is not good enough and it will come out when we lift it. It is not good idea, so please arrange a proper replacement from the supplier immediately.
  

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There are creases and unwanted folds in the silk shades supplied. This was caused by improper stacking in the carton. T hey tried to rejoin the broken glass pieces, but the joint is poor and will come apart when we lift it.

  • There are creases and unwanted folds in the silk shades supplied.
  • This was caused by improper stacking in the carton.
  • T hey tried to rejoin the broken glass pieces, but the joint is poor and will come apart when we lift it.
  • It is no t a good idea, so please arrange a proper replacement from the supplier ASAP.
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There are creases and unwanted folds in the silk shades supplied. This was caused by improper stacking in the carton.

They tried to rejoin the broken glass pieces, but the joint is poor and will come apart when we lift it. It is not a good idea, so please arrange a proper replacement from the supplier ASAP.

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