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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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My mother had cataract and it now in a critical condition. Her doctor now advised her to undergo the treatment of cataract surgery which the only the option available. As no one has support to my family except my aged father and me, I request you to grand me a two weeks short leave which starts from (date). My mother eagerly need my presence at home this time.
Under this circumstances, I request you to look
into this matter and approve the leave as requested
  

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My mother has cataracts and her condition is getting critical. Her doctor advised her to have cataract surgery which is the only treatment option available. As no one supports my family but my aged father and me, I request you to grant me two weeks leave starting (date).

  • My mother has cataracts and her condition is getting critical.
  • Her doctor advised her to have cataract surgery which is the only treatment option available.
  • As no one supports my family but my aged father and me, I request you to grant me two weeks leave starting (date).
  • My mother urgently needs me at home during her recovery to care for her.
  • I would appreciate your consideration and approval of my leave request.
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My mother has cataracts and her condition is getting critical. Her doctor advised her to have cataract surgery which is the only treatment option available. As no one supports my family but my aged father and me, I request you to grant me two weeks leave starting (date). My mother urgently needs me at home during her recovery to care for her.
I would appreciate your consideration and approval
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Thank you for kind help

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