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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Please help me to correct these sentences?

Before we could managed to modify the data in the system, but now we can't modify anything in the system. The system deny the modification and shows that we do not have permission to do that. Did you remove the permission on our accounts for modifying / editing the data in the system?
  

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You don't need to repeat so many words: Previously we could edit the data in the system, but now we cannot. The system rejects any modification, indicating that we do not have permission. Did you remove permissions for editing data?

— Mister Micawber

  • You don't need to repeat so many words: Previously we could edit the data in the system, but now we cannot.
  • The system rejects any modification, indicating that we do not have permission.
  • Did you remove permissions for editing data?
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You don't need to repeat so many words:

Previously we could edit the data in the system, but now we cannot. The system rejects any modification, indicating that we do not have permission. Did you remove permissions for editing data?
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Thank you for helping me to correct my sentences. Is the below sentence correct?
Previously we could edit the data in the system by using edit mode/function, but now we can view the records only because the edit mode was disappeared in our screen mode.
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Previously we could edit the data in the system by using the Edit function, but now we can view the records only because the Edit function has disappeared from our screen mode.
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