0
Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Please help me to correct these sentences

During our regular procedure, we have already noticed that the request made by our site manager for our beach resort project. Further action will be taken in coordination with the site management.
  

Top answer

Anonymous: During our (last) regular procedure, we have already noticed that the request made by our site's manager for our beach has resorted/has been resorting to the project. Further action will be taken in coordination with the site management. In coordination with => I doubt if this phrase should use in this context.

  • Anonymous: During our (last) regular procedure, we have already noticed that the request made by our site's manager for our beach has resorted/has been resorting to the project.
  • Further action will be taken in coordination with the site management.
  • In coordination with => I doubt if this phrase should use in this context.
  • Maybe we can use: Further action will be taken to work with the site management.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0

Anonymous: During our (last) regular procedure, we have already noticed that the request made by our site's manager for our beach has resorted/has been resorting to the project. Further action will be taken in coordination with the site management.
In coordination with => I doubt if this phrase should use in this context.
Maybe we can use: Fu

Related Questions