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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Please help me to correct these sentences.

The supplied transfer valve's outlets are not fit to the existing inlet elbow, it will fit only the single line thread, and also the plumbler couldn't able to unplug one of its outlets. It is too tight and if we try hard, it will break.
  

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Pretty good, but I would write it like this. The outlets on the transfer valve supplied to us does not fit the existing inlet elbow. It fits only the single line thread.

  • Pretty good, but I would write it like this.
  • The outlets on the transfer valve supplied to us does not fit the existing inlet elbow.
  • It fits only the single line thread.
  • In fact, the plumber was not even able to unplug one of the outlets.
  • It's too tight, and if we apply too much force, it will break.
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Pretty good, but I would write it like this.

The outlets on the transfer valve supplied to us does not fit the existing inlet elbow. It fits only the single line thread. In fact, the plumber was not even able to unplug one of the outlets. It's too tight, and if we apply too much force, it will break.

CJ

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