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RJD Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Please help me to correct these sentences
First of all, I don't like to entertain any of your e-mail war. This is only a purely communication between the Client and the Contractor. Please be treated as it is.
I know the meaning of mobilization advance, but I want this amount to be deducted from the invoice forwarded earlier. Unfortunately, this 25% of payment was not shown any of your invoices, so I asked him to provide these details where this amount was credited in our account.
Please be aware that my computer doesn’t have any virus problems. I am communicating with you through my office personal computer which receives lot of mails on daily basis.
So far I haven't received any complaint that my computer has virus problems. However, it is your responsibility to send the documents and make sure that the client has received, especially the requested one. Note that I never used the word "LIE" in our communication, but I used the word "mistake" because I have already noticed so many mistakes in the work and the drawing as well.
Any further changes in the BOQ required, you need to have my approval or Mr XY (who is on my behalf on site) only then can you proceed the work accordingly.
Thank you for your help to correct the errors in my sentences.
I know the meaning of mobilization advance, but I want this amount to be deducted from the invoice forwarded earlier. Unfortunately, this 25% of payment was not shown any of your invoices, so I asked him to provide these details where this amount was credited in our account.
Please be aware that my computer doesn’t have any virus problems. I am communicating with you through my office personal computer which receives lot of mails on daily basis.
So far I haven't received any complaint that my computer has virus problems. However, it is your responsibility to send the documents and make sure that the client has received, especially the requested one. Note that I never used the word "LIE" in our communication, but I used the word "mistake" because I have already noticed so many mistakes in the work and the drawing as well.
Any further changes in the BOQ required, you need to have my approval or Mr XY (who is on my behalf on site) only then can you proceed the work accordingly.
Thank you for your help to correct the errors in my sentences.
Top answer
Hi, Note that the general tone here seems quite emotional and offensive, in a way that is uncommon in a business context. First of all, I am not interested in your e-mail war. This is purely a communication between the client and the contractor.
- Hi, Note that the general tone here seems quite emotional and offensive, in a way that is uncommon in a business context.
- First of all, I am not interested in your e-mail war.
- This is purely a communication between the client and the contractor.
- Please treat it thus.
- I know the meaning of mobilization advance, but I want this amount to be deducted from the invoice forwarded earlier.
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Hi,
Note that the general tone here seems quite emotional and offensive, in a way that is uncommon in a business context.
First of all, I am not interested in your e-mail war. This is purely a communication between the client and the contractor. Please treat it thus.
Note that the general tone here seems quite emotional and offensive, in a way that is uncommon in a business context.
First of all, I am not interested in your e-mail war. This is purely a communication between the client and the contractor. Please treat it thus.
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