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Wreckday Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Please help me to correct these sentences

Dear teacher,

I'm not very sure about the following sentence I wrote being right.

Can you give me some tips? Thanks ~Emotion: smile







1. Comedy movie could not teach us something about real life, because the plot in comedy movie is always ridiculous to make us laugh.



2. It is whatever types of movies can help us to make the closer connection with our family and friends.



3. Although educational movies are worth watching, we cannot deny the other types of movies actually benefiting us.



4. Given the choice between agreeing or disagreeing with the statement that only movies that can teach us something about real life is worth watching, which one do I choose? Some people would choose the answer right.



5.This thought-provoking movie notices every scientist to think more carefully before inventing a new technology.



6. People are more interested to go to the movies.





  

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Hi, 1. Comedy movie cannot teach us about real life, because their plots are always ridiculous. 2.

  • Hi, 1.
  • Comedy movie cannot teach us about real life, because their plots are always ridiculous.
  • 2.
  • It is whatever types of movies can help us to make a closer connection with our family and friends.
  • What does 'it' refer to?
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Hi,


1. Comedy movie cannot teach us about real life, because their plots are always ridiculous.

2. It is whatever types of movies can help us to make a closer connection with our family and friends. What does 'it' refer to?
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I made a careless mistake. The following is the complete sentence.



2. it is whatever types of movies that can help us to make the closer connection with our family and friends.





Can I ask one more question?



Although the high paying job can make life now more comfort
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Hi,
I made a careless mistake. The following is the complete sentence.

2. it is whatever types of movies that can help us to make the closer conn
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it is whatever types of movies that can help us to make the closer connection with our family and friends.



form a bond with our family = make the closer connection with our family?????

It is...... that........



The following is the whole paragragh I wrote. Can you understand what I mean?

I use the "The Emphatic Pattern" to illustrate
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Hi,

Still not totally clear what you mean. Perhaps this.

The most important movie types are the ones that help us to make a closer connection with our family and friends. By going to a movie together, we can enjoy watching *** and talking about its plot.

Clive
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What is "***" ?

I don't understand.

In addition, can you tell me how to use "***" in the sentence?

Thank you, Clive.
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Hi,
It was a typo. Sorry.

By going to a movie together, we can enjoy watching it and talking about its plot.


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