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SHD Posted 15 years ago
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Please help me to correct these sentences.

I am writing you this mail in reference to my friend visited you on [date] regarding the above subject. She had two preterm delivery which were in 2005 and 2009. Both delivery happened at her 24 week of pregnancy, and the second time the baby was 10 days old then died in NICU due to prematurity difficulties. Both time she had Cervical cerclage done with McDonald stitch at 13+5 weeks and 12+3 weeks respectively. She now have twin pregnancy, and the gestational age is five weeks as per ultrasound report. Since their marriage in 2000, they never had a child other than this twin pregnancy. Now their consulting doctor has advised them to travel only after three months and cervical cerclage.



Thanking you in anticipation and your time and perusal

  

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I assume that this is the body of the letter, and that you will add the address and signature line. This is how I would word it (so far) : I am writing to you in reference to my friend who visited you on [date] regarding [name the topic] . She has been married since 2000 but has not yet given birth to a surving child.

— Doctor D

  • I assume that this is the body of the letter, and that you will add the address and signature line.
  • This is how I would word it (so far) : I am writing to you in reference to my friend who visited you on [date] regarding [name the topic] .
  • She has been married since 2000 but has not yet given birth to a surving child.
  • She previously had two preterm deliveries: one in 2005 and one in 2009.
  • Both deliveries occurred during her 24th week of pregnancy.
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I assume that this is the body of the letter, and that you will add the address and signature line. This is how I would word it (so far):

I am writing to you in reference to my friend who visited you on [date] regarding [name the topic]. She has been married since 2000 but has not yet given birth to a surving child. She previously had two preterm deliveries: one i
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Thank you for help me to fix the errors in my sentences

The first child died immediately after born.

13 weeks and five days

I am just trying to give brief history to one of my freind who is a Perinatologist who will look after this case.
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Okay, then I would make a few small changes.

I am writing to provide you with some background on my friend [name] who visited you on [date]. She has been married since 2000 but has not yet given birth to a surviving child. She previously had two preterm deliveries: one in 2005 and one in 2009. Both deliveries occurred during her 24th week of pregnancy. The first child died at b
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