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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Please help me to correct these sentences

Please note that Mr. X's mobile phone was reported as lost on [date], As per our immediate request, Mr. XL asked subscriber to disconnect the line temporarily.
We now requested that we buy a new telephone instrument and activate the line accordingly.
  

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Hi, Please note that Mr. X's mobile phone was reported as lost on [date]. As per our immediate request, Mr.

  • Hi, Please note that Mr.
  • X's mobile phone was reported as lost on [date].
  • As per our immediate request, Mr.
  • XL asked the subscriber (Isn't Mr.
  • ) to disconnect the line temporarily.
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Hi,

Please note that Mr. X's mobile phone was reported as lost on [date]. As per our immediate request, Mr. XL asked the subscriber (Isn't Mr. X the subscriber?) to disconnect the line temporarily.
We now request that we buy a new telephone and activate the line accordingly.

Clive

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