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SHD Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please help me to correct these sentence



We can't modify this suspended lamp into 220V as you requested. Instead, we can connect a step-up transformer to this lights if there is provision to hide the transformer in the ceiling. Even if there is provision in the ceiling, there will be a noise disturbance then the client will make a issue. So, my best advise that ask the supplier to replace this item with 220 V compatible one.

Also, note that whenever you order any electrical related items, it should be 220V compatible unless we have a special request / unless otherwise requested
  

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Here's how I would write this. We can't modify this suspended lamp to make it a 220V fixture as you requested. It is possible to connect a step-up transformer to this light if there is provision made to hide the transformer in the ceiling.

— Doctor D

  • Here's how I would write this.
  • We can't modify this suspended lamp to make it a 220V fixture as you requested.
  • It is possible to connect a step-up transformer to this light if there is provision made to hide the transformer in the ceiling.
  • However, doing this will create a disturbing noise, which the client will not like.
  • My best advise is that you ask the supplier to replace this item with a 220V compatible one.
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Here's how I would write this.

We can't modify this suspended lamp to make it a 220V fixture as you requested. It is possible to connect a step-up transformer to this light if there is provision made to hide the transformer in the ceiling. However, doing this will create a disturbing noise, which the client will not like. My best advise is that you ask the s
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In reviewing my work, I realize I failed to correct one item: "advise" should read "advice" (you need the noun form, not the verb form).
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