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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Please see the attached pictures of silver tray which show a clear view of damage that occurred on the handles and rims. It seems to be the coating was damaged.

  

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anonymous Please see the attached pictures of the silver tray , which show a clear view of damage that occurred on the handles and rims. It seems to be that the coating was damaged. OK as shown.

— CalifJim

  • anonymous Please see the attached pictures of the silver tray , which show a clear view of damage that occurred on the handles and rims.
  • It seems to be that the coating was damaged.
  • OK as shown.
  • I'd write "...
  • silver tray, showing damage on the handles and rims" instead of what you have, but what you have is OK.
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anonymous

Please see the attached pictures of the silver tray, which show a clear view of damage that occurred on the handles and rims. It seems to be that the coating was damaged.

OK as shown.

I'd write "... silver tray, showin

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